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PostPosted: 26/03/2007 16:25:19    Post subject: Angel of death [finish] Reply with quote

INTRO

A day in a usual school a girl walk in the corridor when others student come and push her. She fall and they run.

She pick up her and go to the toilet for being alone.

Larissa : *cry* Why ? Why are they so with me ? Am I so different just cause I love a others kind of music ? I feel so different than theim. Nobody can understand me.

She take from her bag a lot of medicine that she want take when she hear a voice say « You’re not alone, there are others people like you, wait and you should see, our time come ». She doesn’t believe what she heart, she thought she dream but at same time she feel like a lot of presence, like there is people who try to say her « we are there ».

Larissa : Ok, let ‘s see if it should be true

She go to the looking-glass

Larissa’s mind : Look at you, you look like Alice Cooper now with you make-up who leak

She unmake-up her and then take the only thing she always have on her, a black pencil that she use for make-up her eyes. She take her Mp3 player, put him on and go back to the less.

In her mp3, hear she « all we need is lightning with power and might » . . . .



Don’t hesitate to make comment cause I only continue if I see that you like[/wow]
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PostPosted: 26/03/2007 18:41:49    Post subject: Angel of death [finish] Reply with quote

Hey, great when can we read more? Wink
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PostPosted: 26/03/2007 19:55:28    Post subject: Angel of death [finish] Reply with quote

goosh i loov this!!! I wanna more plzz!! Razz Razz
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PostPosted: 27/03/2007 14:56:21    Post subject: Angel of death [finish] Reply with quote

WOW!!! Isa don't you dare stop or else I'll...I'll...I'll CRY!!! Razz
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PostPosted: 27/03/2007 19:27:48    Post subject: Angel of death [finish] Reply with quote

Nice you like it Okay
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PostPosted: 27/03/2007 21:27:24    Post subject: Angel of death [finish] Reply with quote

Chapter 1


Month had past and we find a woman kneeling before a man. She was so beautiful that you could die for her, in her back was black wing. She was on speak to the man

Woman : My master ! We find her, the last angel

Man : Good ! And his her power wake up?

Woman : Not for the moment, she don't know she's one of us but someone watched her

Man : Perfect, I see that I making good when I choose you as leader, my angel

Woman : It's a honour for me


After she go, we can better see the man. In reality he is a monster, he turn him before four tube, we see in others monsters.

Monster : My friends ! The time will come that all the angel of death schould be reunite and bring you back to live


It was lunch time, Larissa was on eat when she see a girl dressed like a gothic

Larissa's mind : O___O A gothic? Here?

She didn't make more attention and go take breath when guys come and begin nag and slur her. She begin to lose her quiet when her eyes become lighter blue like the sky, she just look at one of the guys and he fall dead . . . .

She doesn't see that a little bit far, the gothic girl was on watched

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PostPosted: 27/03/2007 21:35:16    Post subject: Angel of death [finish] Reply with quote

i loooove it!! Isa...prepare a date for me with it!! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 28/03/2007 19:02:22    Post subject: Angel of death [finish] Reply with quote

I love it Isa, keep it up! Okay
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PostPosted: 29/03/2007 16:35:06    Post subject: Angel of death [finish] Reply with quote

Do you prefer short chapter but closer one by one

Or long but more time between two
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PostPosted: 29/03/2007 16:39:06    Post subject: Angel of death [finish] Reply with quote

Love it and for the chapter i prefer short and closer because i can´t wait long for the chapters. I bite my nails and that´s not good Razz
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PostPosted: 29/03/2007 18:21:55    Post subject: Angel of death [finish] Reply with quote

Chap 2


Larissa was on draw, her Mp3 player on her ear when she saw the gothic girl (GG) coming on her

GG : Hi !

Larissa : Hi !

GG : Sorry do disturb you but I observe you since long time and want to know you better, you look nice

Larissa : Thanks, It's nice to see here girls like me, there isn't a lot

GG : That's sure ! Hey, you draw good angel

Larissa : *Blush* I was always, since I remember, passionate by angel

GG : Me too but I specific like the angel of death. Do you know them ?

Larissa : Not really but say me more about them

GG : Everybody thought that they are the angel who kill but they only attended the people for who it was time to die, they never choice to kill

Larissa : A lot of people say that they doesn'f exist

GG : So long time ago, people make that they lose their power. They thought that so they shouldn't die anymore but it chance nothing

Larissa : How many angel was there ?

GG : Five. Hey what's this draw ?

Larissa show her a draw

GG : A mummy

Larissa : Yeah ! I never stop to dream about him since month ago now and I don't know who he is or how interpretate this dream

GG : If you want I know somebody who can help you about dream

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PostPosted: 29/03/2007 19:33:32    Post subject: Angel of death [finish] Reply with quote

Great! I love it. And tomorrow will be a new chappy? Wink
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PostPosted: 29/03/2007 20:51:23    Post subject: Angel of death [finish] Reply with quote

awww....a mummy drawing.......... Smile
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PostPosted: 30/03/2007 06:11:11    Post subject: Angel of death [finish] Reply with quote

IA wrote:
Great! I love it. And tomorrow will be a new chappy? Wink


It's to see how many time it take me to tip the chap on the pc

But I schould try
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PostPosted: 30/03/2007 20:59:51    Post subject: Angel of death [finish] Reply with quote

Chap 3


Later we find back the gothic girl speaking to the woman with the wing

GG : Leader ! I come on report

Leader : I listen

GG : The girls make dream over her master and she kill a guy even she thought that he had a heart attack

Leader : The time to introduce him to her is coming


After that, at school

GG : Hey !

Larissa : Hi ! How are you ?

GG : Fine, if you want I can introduce you my friend who can analysis the dream

Larissa : Great ! When ?

GG : Now if you want

Larissa : Perfect

*The two girls where on go when they hear guys named them "weird". GG go to the guys and take one of them by his neck and lifted him from the floor*

GG : Who's the weird now ? You no more make the malign isn't it little scared boy ?

Larissa's mind : Wouaw what a strong

Larissa : Let's him go we have better to do

GG : You're right

*She let the guy fall and the two girls go join the friend of GG. She's in reality the angel of death in the body of a normal girl*

GG : Larissa, I introduce you leader

Larissa : Nice to meet you, leader it's a special name

Leader : It's a nickname like named GG, gothic girl. She say me you're fan of angel

Larissa : Yes, are you a passionate of angel of death like her ?

Leader : I am, yes

Larissa : You then can answers my question. On who obey them, God or Satan ?

Leader : *Laught* No one of the two, they only obey on their master

Larissa : Their master ?

GG : Every death angel have their own master. The relationship between a angel and it master is so intense that no one find a word to describe that

Leader : Do you remember wich feeling you have for the mummy of your dream ?

Larissa : I can hardly explain, it's more than respect or love, like I could die for him

GG : Believe us we understand

Leader : Come with us, there someone we should like introduce you

*They go together in the room where was the four tube. Larissa saw only one of them, she advance to the tube, inside was the mummy of her dream*

Larissa : Master Amen

She was on cry between that her memories come back. She remember the day that human had bind her and the others angel. They had use magic and make that the angel lose their power. She also remember how human had kill her master before her without that she can do anything and the sadness she feel before she feel asleep and don't remember anything

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